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Network marketing leaders realize that . . .
If your first sentence is good, the world will
lean forward and worship the ground you walk on.
The rest of your presentation doesn't matter.
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Dear
Fellow Networker,
I
can't over-emphasize the power of these two sentences.
It is magic. If you say the right thing in your first
sentence, prospects lean forward and look for reasons
to join.
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One
good first sentence can make you tens of thousands of
dollars. Fortunately, I have several great first
sentences I use to regularly grow my business. You may
want to develop some, too.
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When I say first sentences, I also mean:
1. Subject lines on e-mail messages
2. Headlines for an ad.
3. The first sentence in a letter
or e-mail.
4. The title of your brochure or
tape.
Here is the real-world truth:
Get the headline or first sentence right,
and everything else will work.
Here are five first
sentences that I use successfully. Each
sentence has earned me tens of thousands
of dollars. It took a few years of “trial and error”
to come up with these winners, but go ahead and use
them if you like.
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Tom
"Big Al" Schreiter's Top Five First
Sentences
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“This will make you
feel like you're 16 years old again – but with
better judgment.”
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“There are two types
of people in the world . . . those who get an
extra paycheck in their mailbox every week, and
those who don’t.”
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“This will make your
skin feel like you’re 16 years old, but without
the acne.”
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“Want to get a check
every time your neighbor picks up the phone?”
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“I show people how
to fire their boss.”
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Each of these sentences make the prospect lean
forward – looking for reasons to
join or purchase. |
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But
if your first sentence is weak, then your prospect
will lean back and look for reasons
not to join or purchase!
That’s how network marketing works . . . and that’s
why some leaders make a lot of money with very little
effort. They just talk to prospects who are
leaning forward.
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"With
this easy to use program you can finally create
hundreds of great headlines, each specific to your
needs,
in just 30 seconds or less." |
Want to make some
money?
Just create some great first sentences
or headlines for your business. And
don’t be scared. It’s easy. Get ready for bigger bonus
checks, cruises, time with your family . . .
You
can have hundreds of great headlines or
first sentences customized for your
business with this $29
Headline Creator Pro software program
that
I found that automatically creates
awesome headlines and first sentences.
This is the neatest software program.
Every friend I showed it to – loved it!
You will love it too! |
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I
don’t often endorse other people’s products, but this
is an exception. This is really, really good.
Even
Ed, my negative friend, loves it. That says a lot.
Check this out.
Even Ed is partially smiling after
using this headline software.
Create almost 100
headlines or
first sentences in 30 seconds.
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Step #1: Answer Questions.
Look at the picture on the left of my computer screen.
It asks
four questions. Fill in your answers to the four
questions.
Step #2: Create Headlines. Use your mouse to click
on “Create Headlines” and presto! You’ll get about 100
great headlines or first sentences! This is really
simple. I love it.
That’s it.
You'll be amazed at how easily you'll be creating
money-making headlines when you use this software!
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How about an example?
I
am going to use the program now to create some
headlines for . . . how about some headlines for the
“Headline Program”?
Here are the four questions the program asks, and the
answers that I typed in:
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Step #1: Answer Questions.
Step #2: Create Headlines.
Step #2 was easy. I just pressed the button . . . and
here are the 98 great headlines and first sentences
the program created – in less than 30 seconds! (How
quickly can you push a button?)

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Are
you impressed?
I
was blown away.
I
can now write great headlines and first sentences for
each of my company’s products and services. And, I can
write great headlines and first sentences for niche
markets, targeted opportunity prospects, e-mail
subject lines, letters and brochures (just to impress
my negative friends like Ed.)
It’s cheap.
Order your Headline
Creator Program now.
It’s only
$29.
You’ll be addicted to this program —
I am. You will
use it for newsletters, prospecting, retailing,
presentations . . .
and I still haven’t run out of uses for it.
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Get
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Order your
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And yes,
you know that I will send you some extra
bonuses. I always do, right?
Bonus #1:
100
Greatest Headlines Ever Written.
Time has shown these 100 headlines to generate
more positive (and profitable) responses than
any others ever created. (By the way, it's this
list that was used as the basis for the Headline
Program.) Just click on the Resources on the
left hand bottom of the main screen of the
program to get these.
Bonus #2: 277 Hypnotic
Words/Phrases.
You will get a list of the 277 most powerful and
proven words and phrases that you must have for
your headlines and sales letters.
If you don't
know about these trance-inducing words and
phrases then you are leaving piles of extra easy
money on the table. Just click on the Resources
on the left hand bottom of the main screen of
the program to get these.
Bonus #3: 91 Emotional
Triggers.
People don't buy because of logic -- they
buy based on emotion. Get 91 reaction triggers
that stirs the emotions of your readers --
making them act swiftly and without regret.
Just
click on the Resources on the left hand bottom
of the main screen of the program to get these.
Bonus #4:
Big Al “Live” explaining first sentences and
headlines. This is the first
CD in the Big Al SuperSponsoring Workshop
Home Study Course.
Tom Schreiter explains the
power of the first sentence or headline, and how
it will instantly make your prospect either
lean forward or lean back.
This is an audio CD, so play it over and over
again as you drive your automobile. You’ll love
the techniques. 
Bonus #5:
A
$29 gift certificate.
You
might like my Tom Schreiter's CD in the Big Al
SuperSponsoring Workshop Home Study Course so
much, that you’ll want to buy the whole course.
If you do, and you
order by
I’ll give you a gift certificate for $29 off the regular
price. Fair enough? |
Start
using this Headline Creator Pro
Program today and never
worry about getting prospects to say "YES!"
again.
Tom
“Big Al” Schreiter
P.S. My sister saw me use this program. She
immediately wanted it for herself and her three kids.
Everyone will love this program.
P.P.S. The program is PC-compatible. So if you have a
PC, order now. Don’t let weak first sentences and
headlines kill your business. I’m still “blown away”
with this neat, inexpensive computer program. I can
have more headlines in 30 seconds than I could produce
in three days. Excellent!
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